Score: 9

"9."

submission: Element trailer

date: April 7, 2005

Standalone drawings were OK but your wonderful animation really kicked it up about ten notches. Really looked rather good. I also liked the environments and characters and everything, though unfortunately they didn't mean much, being as this is a trailer. So although there is no story, apparent plot or reason, or anything of that nature, you worked the animation rather well indeed and it standed to entertain.

Score: 8

"Alright!"

submission: The Real Legend 2

date: April 7, 2005

It was above subpar. I watched the first on and this one suffers from the same problems. It's really slow. And long. And kinda boring. There's a lot of superfluous scenes in it. And the animation is really limited. The characters hardly ever move and when they do I can tell you try and not show the legs to avoid walk cycles. Come on man, put some more work into it and the animation could be great.

I think if you clean it up some more and get rid of some of the scenes and cut out a lot of the fluff where nothing happens at all you could really have something great. Make the scenes shorter and make them really pop. I wanna see quick, snappy, clever jokes. Some of the jokes were funny but I didn't really laugh because I was falling sleep.

I'm only being so negative because this could be really great. I love Zelda and I think you're really onto something awesome. I love the style and I love the idea, but the execution is only par at best and sub-par at worst. I hope the next one will have some of these ideas in it. Looking forward to it.

Score: 10

"Yay."

submission: There she is!! step 2

date: April 7, 2005

This, in my opinion, is a very cute and well made flash. There is heart and soul behind it. Obviously, there are some people of ... very little brain, who cannot seem to comprehend what it means. You can't expect everyone to be, well, smart. Also, a clue guys - the song, and the creator, are both Korean. Not Chinese, not Japanese - Korean. Don't show off your ignorance by blanketing every Asian thing you stumble across as one race. :P

Excellent work!! I look forward to more.

Score: 8

"Average."

submission: Madness Depredation

date: April 5, 2005

Don't get me wrong, the Madness series is a good one... save for that it's kind of like just a rehash. All it does is repeat itself. Not to say that killing scrubs left and right isn't entertaining, it is, but when you've seen it done plenty of times before it just loses it's magic.

If the Madness series is going to go on, I would like to see a little change to the formula... Like... maybe new characters at least?

Also, i gave a low score on the music. I just didn't like that kind of music. I believe that music in a flash cartoon should blend well with the animation and action going on screen. The music is like a sea of beats, kind of sounds like it has something to do with a circus gone wrong, and doesn't really fit in well with the action and senseless murder.

Score: 8

"!!!"

submission: BoyScout 5

date: March 19, 2005

I LOVE your style, and the animation was a smooth as... erm... something REALLY smooth. Oh, I dunno.. a bowling ball or something...!

Anyway, I didn't find it that funny, but when the boy got his head stuck in the bowl it really seemed like he was drowning. His body language was very realistic, and it actually triggered a slight phobic reaction in me! (I have an intense fear of drowning, or being trapped underwater... lol).

So yeah, well done for the realism and animation! I don't think it really mattered that it wasn't that funny, it was still fantastic.

Score: 9

"OMFG!"

submission: Retarded Animal Babies 12

date: March 16, 2005

That was awsome how you incorperated one of the best cult films ever made..."They Live"!! That was very cool & as usual very funny! When I saw where the episode was going I got excited hoping to see the fight scene in the ally...lol. Nice work Dave...

Score: 7

":o"

submission: Roof Tiling

date: March 13, 2005

David, I see you're as happy as ever. =) Love your stuff, but this one wasn't your best standard. It just came across as an echo of your other works. Same atmosphere as Salad Fingers, but somehow I didn't care about what happened your main char, unlike our favourite fingers dude, or Toast Boy.

Graphics were intersting, the sky worked particularly well. Wife was a nice character, supported the strip well.

Think in the end it only failed to catch me because nothing surprising happened, you could guess it all, and I just didnt care about the guy. And the atmosphere, tho brilliant, is not new.

Sorry, I love your stuff so much I feel I've betrayed you now. Sniff. Maybe i'll go sit on the roof..

Score: 6

"o.o"

submission: TmsT's Zero Wing Rhapsody

date: March 13, 2005

It was very clever of you to use the Zero Wings script to make an excellent song, it was a shame the lyrics were far too simple. I mean, one syllable is stretched to 3 notes at one time. showing the song is kinda shallow and basic, but the song came through with excellent devotion to the original song. Top stuff.

Score: 10

"Too good."

submission: Demonic Defence 4

date: March 13, 2005

Huge, huge, huge improvement. I can't believe how awesome this game is. With all the differing modes of play and the music plus enhanced graphics, this game kicks ass. I'll be sad not to see a Demonic Defence 5. (pssst you know defense is the correct spelling right??). Congrats on a great game

Score: 9

"Good."

submission: Kazahana Intro

date: March 1, 2005

Well done! As usual,
Awesome visual graphics and enchanced story-line were expected out of you guys. Yet again another job well done. Can't wait for the next one ^.^ Keep the production going guys, good job.